I’m a pretty voracious reader and I’ve decided to add some book reviews. I enjoy reading other peoples reviews so I thought mine might be helpful to someone else. I’ve been playing with this idea for a while now but this book has caused me to start.
This book is written by Neil Abercrombie and Richard Hoyt. Richard Hoyt is a fairly prolific writer although I’ve never read anything else by him. I found about 26 other books by him and many of them seem to be well received. Neil Abercrombie on the other hand is a US Congressman, from Hawaii. He is clearly not a writer and, while I don’t want to say he shouldn’t quit his day job, he should try to find something he’s good at. Cause writing ain’t it.
In the interest of full disclosure I must tell you I did not finish this book. Being a fairly fast reader, I have been reading this book for 3 weeks at lunch time and am only 1/2 way through it. I have officially given up on finishing it.
The premise of the story is that terrorists have entered the Capitol and killed hundreds of Senators and Congressmen. While I don’t want anyone killed, the thought of getting rid of hundreds of these jerks is something I cheer. The book then follows the hunt for the terrorists, and apparently the lead up to the attack. Usually I like this type of story. But this book sucks!! I am 1/2 way through it and have met so many characters it’s impossible to keep them straight. The character development is bizarre. Some of them you get a good bit of detail and background, others nothing.
There is no continuity in the time line. It jumps forward in time and back in time and it’s almost impossible to keep track of when what you’re reading is happening. Also, large leaps are made in time and characters seem to forget what they did in the last paragraph. One character gets a drink and in the next sentence someone else pours him a drink. Of course he could be an alcoholic although it was never disclosed in the development. It’s terrible and when you remember all the little details, like I do, it’s annoying as hell. I would read sentences over and over trying to make sense of the time line or the actions of the characters.
The conversations between the characters are stilted and awkward. It would appear that the writers have no idea how people talk to each other. Conversations don’t flow and you can’t believe that two people would talk to each other like that. Interesting that the politicians seem to have normal conversations.
And then there’s the characters and the views. The fact that Neil Abercrombie is a screaming liberal comes across loud and clear. The portrayal of a conservative talk show host is so over the top it disgusted me. I can’t understand having such a low opinion of someone just because of their views. Apparently everyone who doesn’t think exactly like Neil is a slob, coke sniffing, idiot, who panders to the lowest common denominator and needs to be in drug treatment. It’s disgusting.
So, in short, this book is almost hard to follow, hard to read, and not worth the paper it’s printed on. I bought it as a joke since the folks here in the lab don’t have a high opinion of Neil. I’m really glad I only paid 99 cents for it at the used bookstore. Trust me, it’s not worth 99 cents.